Writing · Leasing & Conversion
If You Think Copy Doesn’t Matter in 2025, Your Competitors Will Thank You.
I wanted to sharpen my own copy game, so I started doing something simple. I grab ads in the wild, tear them apart, and rebuild them the way the greats would. It’s the fastest way to see what works, what flops, and why most companies burn money on “cute” instead of “clear.”
Here’s one example from a National CRE Magazine. (See attached Ad)
• It opens with “Dear Philly Developer…” which instantly shrinks the audience. If you’re spending national dollars, why start local and lose 90 percent of your reach?
• The headline is a question that doesn’t punch. “Frustrated with the Utility?” is vague. Be specific in your pain points. Developers aren’t just frustrated; they’re getting crushed by delays, red tape, and blown pro formas.
• It has no economic argument. Not one word about NOI, revenue recovery, or cost shifts.
• The CTA is vague. “Learn more” is a weak marketing offer. Developers don’t want to “learn.” They want to fix a problem and make money.
Compare the original ad to the first ad I rewrote. Clear pain. Clear economic benefit. Straight line from problem to payoff.
In practice, you’d build hundreds of ad variations and A/B test your way to real winners. But look around. Almost nobody does this with any discipline. The proof is in the ads themselves. They don’t look tested. They look copied from one another.
Marketing shouldn’t be just be clever. It should convert.
This is why copy matters.
What do you think?